Guest Author Mary Ellis – Setting – the First Character You Create in a Story

MaryMary Ellis has written twelve novels set in the Amish community and several historical romances. Her latest from Harvest House Publishers, Midnight on the Mississippi, the first of a new mystery series, Secrets of the South, is set in New Orleans. Mary lives in Ohio with her husband, dog and cat and can be found on the web at: or!/pages/Mary-Ellis/126995058236

Setting – the First Character You Create in a Story

by Mary Ellis

What first comes to mind if someone mentions the television show, Hawaii 5-0? The muscular actor who plays Commander Steve McGarrett, or perhaps a clever plot twist in an episode involving identity theft? More likely it’s a visual of tanned young surfers riding the perfect wave to the shores of Waikiki, or perhaps a volcanic peak rising from the mist above the rainforest.

How about NCIS – New Orleans? Those who’ve seen the show might picture Scott Bakula chasing a murderer through the crowd of perennial spring-breakers on Bourbon Street, or maybe tracking a psychopath by airboat through the gator-infested bayous of Cajun country.

Most TV shows and movies rely on setting for more than just backdrop. The setting becomes as integral to the story as protagonists and villains. I recently read about a serious drug problem in a rural town in southern Ohio. Despite sharing the same key elements, I can’t imagine Michael Mann considering Chillicothe for his series, Miami Vice. Julian Fellows didn’t start by writing dialogue for the characters of Downton Abbey, he began with Highclere Castle and wove his drama around this magnificent English estate.

Yes, movie and television rely primarily on visuals, but books paint pictures in the minds of readers. Consider the imagery created by Michener’s South Pacific, John Grisham’s The Testament, or Charles Dickens’s Great Expectations. Could you imagine moving Oliver Twist from the slums of London to the heath-covered Scottish highlands? I don’t think so. Setting can be either protagonistic as in Jane Eyre or Under a Tuscan Sun or antagonistic as in Steinbeck’s Grapes of Wrath or Jack London’s Call of the Wild. Whether creating a romantic spot to rekindle the flame of lost love, or a dangerous snake pit from which your characters must escape, make your choice carefully. Then create a memorable world your readers can see, hear, taste and smell.

When an author contemplates a new series, location becomes even more crucial. Consider Jan Karon’s marvelous series set in Mitford, or Debbie Macomber’s lively romances in Cedar Cove. One of my favorite series by Nevada Barr involves Anna Pigeon, a federal park ranger engaged to an Episcopal priest. Anna solves murder after murder when transferred from one national park to the next. In addition to an intriguing whodunit, readers get a mini-vacation as they visit Carlsbad Canyons National Park in Blind Descent or the Natchez Trace Parkway in Deep South. Mystery series particularly benefit by a change in locale as characters adapt to new challenges, both natural and manmade.

Personally, I love to travel. I often set stories far from home, making several trips for research and to tweak final details. As my husband and I investigate spots to retire, I find plenty of settings for books. Whether you enjoy travel or prefer to write about the town where you were born and raised, never underestimate the power of setting. Create a vivid world; populate it with interesting characters; give them plenty to do and readers will keep coming back for more.

Midnight on the Mississippi

Midnight on the Mississippi

Secrets of the South Mysteries Book 1

Midnight on the Mississippi begins the new Secrets of the South Mysteries from bestselling author Mary Ellis. These complex crime dramas follow an investigator’s quest to make the world a better place…solving one case at a time.

New Orleans–Hunter Galen, a stock and securities broker, suspects his business partner, James Nowak, may be involved in embezzling their clients’ money, but he’s reluctant to jeopardize their friendship based on suspicion alone. After James turns up dead, Hunter realizes his unwillingness to confront a problem may have cost James his life.

Nicki Price, a newly minted PI, intends to solve the stockbroker’s murder, recover the missing millions from the client accounts, and establish herself in the career she adores. As she ferrets out fraud and deception at Galen Investments, Hunter’s fiancee, Ashley Menard, rubs Nicki the wrong way. Nicki doesn’t trust the ostentatious woman with an agenda longer than the Mississippi River. Ashley seems to be hiding something, but is Nicki’s growing attraction to Hunter–a suspected murderer–her true reason for disliking Ashley?

As they encounter sophisticated shell games, blackmail, and murder, Nicki and Hunter’s only option is to turn to God as they search for answers, elude lethal danger, and perhaps discover love along the way.

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About Tamera Lynn Kraft

Tamera Lynn Kraft has always loved adventures and writes Christian historical fiction set in America because there are so many adventures in American history. She is married to the love of her life, has two grown children, and lives in Akron, Ohio. Soldier’s Heart and A Christmas Promise are two of her historical novellas that have been published. She has received 2nd place in the NOCW contest, 3rd place TARA writer’s contest, and is a finalist in the Frasier Writing Contest.

2 thoughts on “Guest Author Mary Ellis – Setting – the First Character You Create in a Story

  1. Totally agree, Mary, that setting is a key character in a story. Do you always set your stories in real places &, if you do, how familiar are you with the locations you choose? My Spinstered series is anchored in Colorado Springs, but I want some major events in the sequel to take place in Nashville. Unfortunately, I’ve never been there. Should I change it to a big city I’ve actually been to, like Chicago, or can I get by with research & talking with people who live there?

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