Words Writers Should Delete

As writers, we love words. But there are some words that should rarely be used or are used in the wrong way. Here’s a list of words I search for in my WIP’s. I’ve used them in bad examples and showed what the sentence would look like if I delete the word. When I find these words, if I can, I hit delete.

Some

There were some flowers in the vase. There were flowers in the vase.

That

She hoped that he would ask her to marry him. She hoped he would ask her to marry him.

Over

Go over to the neighbor’s house. Go to the neighbor’s house.

Even

She even wanted to get some ice cream. She wanted to get some ice cream.

Down

He set down the book on the table. He set the book on the table.

Start

He started to run. He ran.

Begin, began, begun

He began to sing. He sang.

Almost

He was almost six feet tall. He was six feet tall.

Right

I’m doing that right now. I’m doing that now.

Such

She’s such a sweet person. She’s a sweet person. Better yet – She stayed with me until I felt better.

Quite

It’s been quite a day. It’s been a day.

About

Go to the store about 7:00. Go to the store at 7:00.

Then

Then he stormed out. He stormed out.

All

All of the buildings were torn down. The buildings were torn down.

Seem

He seemed like a gentleman. He was a gentleman. Better yet – He opened the door for me.

Very

The dog barked very loudly. The dog barked. (dogs don’t bark softly)

Been

I’ve been tired. I’m tired.

Only

He was only twelve years old. He was twelve years old.

Real

She was real ugly. She was ugly.

On

She sat on the chair. She sat.

Had

He had known she would leave him. He knew she would leave him.

Out

He ran out into the field. He ran into the field.

Off

He took his clothes off. He undressed.

Up

She glanced up at him. She glanced at him.

Back

I went back to the scene of the crime. I returned to the scene of the crime.

Being

I was being a silly. I was silly. Better yet – I stuck my tongue out and giggled.

Going

She was going to break up with him. She would break up with him.

Got

I have got to go. I have to go.

Was before ing

He was running in the race. He ran in the race.

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About Tamera Kraft

Tamera Kraft has been a children’s pastor for over 20 years. She is the leader of a ministry called Revival Fire For Kids where she mentors other children’s leaders, teaches workshops, and is a children’s ministry consultant and children’s evangelist. She is also a writer and has curriculum published including Kid Konnection 5: Kids Entering the Presence of God published by Pathway Press. She is a recipient of the 2007 National Children’s Leaders Association Shepherd’s Cup for lifetime achievement in children’s ministry.

20 thoughts on “Words Writers Should Delete

  1. Thanks Kathleen and Suzanne for stopping by. I always do a find and delete on these words. Even though I plan not to use them, they always find their way into my first draft.

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  4. I’d add a caveat of reviewing each use to see if it has merit. For example, if I’d probably delete these out of narrative automatically, but in dialogue, I’d have to see if that’s how the character spoke.

    Nothing this because I ran into a beginner who had found one of these lists through a word count sight. I think they had listed ‘was’ as something that was overused, so he went through and revised every single sentence to not use the words. It particularly stood out that he was trying to avoid using the word was.

    Linda Adams
    http://garridon.wordpress.com/

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  6. Great website. Two words, and and but, are popping up as the first word in a sentence in newspapers and books. Those words are conjunctions and should only be acknowledged as a beginning word when quoted.”And…

    Any feedback?

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  8. Everyone has crutch phrases. Moderation is the key in all of these.

    Don’t throw out any of these words altogether. I’ll especially point out “had” There are many times when the writing calls for past perfect tense.

    Also add “look” and “just” to your watchlist. These pop up all too often.

    And remember there’s nothing grammatically wrong about beginning a sentence with with a conjunction; just don’t overdo it.

  9. I think each writer should keep such as a list, including your personal problems. Have reviewers let you know what yours are. I just read a book in which the author used the word “commented” about 60 times. (Yes, I tallied them)

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