December 16, 2009

Merry Christmas!

I won’t have any more posts until after Christmas. I wished you a blessed Christmas and pray God’s reveals His love for you in a new way this Christmas.

The Christmas Story:

Matthew 1:18-25 (NLT)

This is how Jesus the Messiah was born. His mother, Mary, was engaged to be married to Joseph. But before the marriage took place, while she was still a virgin, she became pregnant through the power of the Holy Spirit. 

Joseph, her fiancé , was a good man and did not want to disgrace her publicly, so he decided to break the engagement quietly.

As he considered this, an angel of the Lord appeared to him in a dream. “Joseph, son of David,” the angel said, “do not be afraid to take Mary as your wife. For the child within her was conceived by the Holy Spirit. And she will have a son, and you are to name him Jesus, for he will save his people from their sins.” 

All of this occurred to fulfill the Lord’s message through his prophet: “Look! The virgin will conceive a child! She will give birth to a son, and they will call him Immanuel, which means ‘God is with us.’”

When Joseph woke up, he did as the angel of the Lord commanded and took Mary as his wife. But he did not have sexual relations with her until her son was born. And Joseph named him Jesus.

Luke 2:1-38 (NLT)

At that time the Roman emperor, Augustus, decreed that a census should be taken throughout the Roman Empire. (This was the first census taken when Quirinius was governor of Syria.) All returned to their own ancestral towns to register for this census.

And because Joseph was a descendant of King David, he had to go to Bethlehem in Judea, David’s ancient home. He traveled there from the village of Nazareth in Galilee. He took with him Mary, his fiancé, who was now obviously pregnant.

And while they were there, the time came for her baby to be born. She gave birth to her first child, a son. She wrapped him snugly in strips of cloth and laid him in a manger, because there was no lodging available for them.

That night there were shepherds staying in the fields nearby, guarding their flocks of sheep. 

Suddenly, an angel of the Lord appeared among them, and the radiance of the Lord’s glory surrounded them. They were terrified, 
but the angel reassured them. “Don’t be afraid!” he said. “I bring you good news that will bring great joy to all people. The Savior—yes, the Messiah, the Lord—has been born today in Bethlehem, the city of David!  And you will recognize him by this sign: You will find a baby wrapped snugly in strips of cloth, lying in a manger.”

Suddenly, the angel was joined by a vast host of others—the armies of heaven—praising God and saying, “Glory to God in highest heaven,     and peace on earth to those with whom God is pleased.”

When the angels had returned to heaven, the shepherds said to each other, “Let’s go to Bethlehem! Let’s see this thing that has happened, which the Lord has told us about.”

They hurried to the village and found Mary and Joseph. And there was the baby, lying in the manger. After seeing him, the shepherds told everyone what had happened and what the angel had said to them about this child. 

All who heard the shepherds’ story were astonished, but Mary kept all these things in her heart and thought about them often.

The shepherds went back to their flocks, glorifying and praising God for all they had heard and seen. It was just as the angel had told them. 

Eight days later, when the baby was circumcised, he was named Jesus, the name given him by the angel even before he was conceived. Then it was time for their purification offering, as required by the law of Moses after the birth of a child; so his parents took him to Jerusalem to present him to the Lord. 

The law of the Lord says, “If a woman’s first child is a boy, he must be dedicated to the LORD.”  So they offered the sacrifice required in the law of the Lord—“either a pair of turtledoves or two young pigeons.”

At that time there was a man in Jerusalem named Simeon. He was righteous and devout and was eagerly waiting for the Messiah to come and rescue Israel. The Holy Spirit was upon him and had revealed to him that he would not die until he had seen the Lord’s Messiah. 

That day the Spirit led him to the Temple. So when Mary and Joseph came to present the baby Jesus to the Lord as the law required, 
Simeon was there. He took the child in his arms and praised God, saying, “Sovereign Lord, now let your servant die in peace, as you have promised. I have seen your salvation, which you have prepared for all people. He is a light to reveal God to the nations, and he is the glory of your people Israel!”

Jesus’ parents were amazed at what was being said about him.

Then Simeon blessed them, and he said to Mary, the baby’s mother, “This child is destined to cause many in Israel to fall, but he will be a joy to many others. He has been sent as a sign from God, but many will oppose him. As a result, the deepest thoughts of many hearts will be revealed. And a sword will pierce your very soul.”

Anna, a prophet, was also there in the Temple. She was the daughter of Phanuel from the tribe of Asher, and she was very old. Her husband died when they had been married only seven years. Then she lived as a widow to the age of eighty-four. She never left the Temple but stayed there day and night, worshiping God with fasting and prayer.

She came along just as Simeon was talking with Mary and Joseph, and she began praising God. She talked about the child to everyone who had been waiting expectantly for God to rescue Jerusalem.

December 13, 2009

Top 10 Classic Christmas Movies of All Time

These are 10 classic must watch every year Christmas movies. Since everyone has their favorite version of A Christmas Carol, I didn’t include those movies. To see my favorite 10 renditions of A Christmas Carol, click here.

10. Remember the Night

Released 1940

Directed by Mitchell Leisen

Starring Fred MacMurray and Barbara Stanwick

A prosecuting attorney asks for a pretty theif to be let out on bail for Christmas. When the theif is placed in his custody, interesting things occur.

9. The Homecoming: A Christmas Story

Released 1971

Directed by Fielder Cook

Starring Patricia Neil and Richard Thomas

This movie became the pilot of the TV series, The Waltons, and tells of a family during the depression.

8. Santa Claus, The Movie

Released 1985

Director: Jeannot Szwork

Starring David Huddleston and Dudley Moore

The best film that tells the story of Santa Claus.

7. 3 Godfathers

Released 1948

Director: John Ford

Starring John Wayne

A Christmas western where three outlaws must get a baby safely to the cow town of Bethlehem while running from a possee. This is my personal favorite John Wayne movie.

6. Home Alone

Released 1990

Director: Chris Columbus

Starring Macauley Culkin

First of many movies about a boy accidently left home alone at Christmas time.

5. White Christmas

Released 1954

Director: Micheal Curtiz

Starring Bing Crosby and Danny Kaye

Best Christmas musical ever made with great singing and dancing features the song, “White Christmas”.

4. A Charlie Brown Christmas

Released 1965

Created by Charles M. Shultz

Animated

This animated classic helps Charlie Brown learn the true meaning of Christmas. The best part is where Linus tells the Christmas story word for word from the Bible and ends with “That’s what Christmas is all about, Charlie Brown.”

3. Miracle on 34th Street

Released 1947

Directed by George Seaton

Starring Maureen O’Hara, John Payne, Edmund Gween, and a very young Natalie Wood

This is the best movie made about believing in Santa Clause. It also featured the Macy’s Thanksgiving Day Parade.

2. A Holiday Affair

Released 1949

Directed by Don Hartman

Starring Janet Leigh and Robert Mitchum

This is the best Christmas love story ever filmed. It’s sad more people don’t know about it.

1. It’s a Wonderful Life

Released 1946

Directed by Frank Capra

Starring James Stewart and Donna Reed

This touching story of an ordinary man who sacrifices his own ambitions for others is my all time favorite Christmas movie.

December 11, 2009

Top Ten “A Christmas Carol” Movie Adaptations

Every year, new remakes of movies based on “A Christmas Carol” by Charles Dickens are created. Here are my top ten favorites.

10. Scrooged

Released 1988

Starring Bill Murray

9. The Muppet Christmas Carol

Released 1992

Starring Micheal Caine

8. Ms. Scrooge

Released 1997

Starring Cicely Tyson

7. 12 Days of Christmas Eve

Released 2004

Starring Steven Weber and Molly Shannon

6. Mr. Magoo’s Christmas Carol

Released 1962 (animated)

Starring Mr. Magoo

5. A Christmas Carol

Released 1951

Starring Alistar Sims

4. An American Christmas Carol

Released 1979

Starring Henry Winkler

3. A Christmas Carol

Released 1984

Starring George C. Scott

2. A Christmas Carol

Released 1999

Starring Patrick Stewart

1. Disney’s A Christmas Carol 3D

Released 2009

Starring Jim Carey

December 9, 2009

The Top Ten Classic Christmas Stories

10. The Little Match Stick Girl by Hans Christian Anderson: A sad tear jerker about a poor little girl who gets to have the Christmas of her dreams. Don’t read it unless you have tissues handy.

9. The Polar Express by Chris Van Allsburg: This newer classic tells a story about a boy learning the importance of belief.

8. Christmas Day In the Morning by Pearl S. Buck: A classic tale about showing love at Christmas. 

7. The Other Wise Man by Henry Van Dyke: The wise man who didn’t make it to birth of Christ in time finds out why Jesus really came to Earth.

6. How the Grinch Stole Christmas by Dr. Suess: “Maybe Christmas,” he thought, “doesn’t come from a store. Maybe Christmas…perhaps…means a little bit more!” Who could ever forget this line from this classic story?

5. The Gift of the Magi by O. Henry: The best Christmas romance ever written. It shows how we sacrifice for the ones we love.

4. Twas the Night Before Christmas by Clement C. Moore: The original story about Santa Claus 

3. The Three Trees by Author Unknown: This story tells about three trees who served a great purpose.

2. A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens: This story of repentance set at Christmas is the best Christmas story other than the real story in the Bible.

1. The Nativity Story (Luke 2:1-20): This is the story of Christmas. Without Christ being born in Bethlehem, this would be a very dark world.

December 6, 2009

Recommended Movie: Disney’s A Christmas Carol 3D

 
 Rated PG for scary sequences & scary images
 
Cast: Jim Carrey, Gary Oldman, Colin Firth, Bob Hoskins, Robin Wright Penn, Cary Elwes
 
Director: Robert Zemeckis
 

 

Description:

Charles Dickens’ timeless tale of an old miser who must face Ghosts of Christmas Past, Present and Yet-to-Come, as they help to bring kindness to his otherwise cold heart. The Ghosts remind him of the man he used to be, the hard truth of what the world is today, and what will happen if he does not strive to be a better man. Set around Christmas, the most joyous day of the year, Scrooge realizes the sharp contrast of his own personality. 

Jim Carrey plays four separate roles in this updated version of A Christmas Carol. Carrey portrays Scrooge, as well as the three ghosts (Past, Present, and Yet-to-Come). His dynamic character roles keep the four characters as diverse as being played by four actors. 

My Review:  ♥  ♥  ♥  ♥

A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens is my all time favorite Christmas story. I love to read it every year. I almost have it memorized. Because I love the original novel so much, I have never found a movie adaptation that does it justice. However this one comes close. The special effects are better that I imagined when I read the novel and are enough to recommend this movie. So is the great acting by Jim Carrey who played four characters so differently that I didn’t think it was the same actor until I saw the credits. But these things are not why I recommend this movie. 

One problem I’ve had with every “Christmas Carol” movie including the Patrick Stewart and George C. Scott versions (my favorites until this movie came out) is the drastic instantaneous change in Scrooge. That’s not how the book portrayed. In the book, Scrooge began to see the error of his ways almost immediately. The gradual realization, repentance, and change is what make the characterization in the story superb. But until now, every movie adaptation has had Scrooge fight with the ghosts until, at the end, he’s scared straight. This never cut it with me. 

The Disney version does a better job with this. Scrooge shed a tear when the first ghost reminds him of his past. He continues his reformation throughout the movie making the change more believable. I wish the movie had been longer, and they had shown more of the scenes from the novel. But they did remain true to the script. My favorite part was the panoramic view when Scrooge watched the people going to church while the camera focused in on the cross.  

A Christmas Carol truly is a story of repentance. I’m glad Disney filmed the movie this way. I recommend this movie. 

  

December 4, 2009

Fiction Proposal Marketing Page

The marketing page includes market analysis, similar books, and what you, the author intend to do to market your book.

Market Analysis:

This is the section where you tell the demographics, target audience, of who would be interested in your book. Include age, gender, interests, religion, or anything else you think might narrow it down. Don’t write that everyone would like this book. You want to narrow your niche.

Similar Books:

This is usually the hardest part to do. You aren’t looking for books that are the same as yours. List novels that have some similarities. For instance, if you’re writing a romance about the Revolutionary era, list other romances from that era. Don’t be afraid to list movies or crossovers. For one novel I said it is Redeeming Love meets Outlaw Josie Wells. This is that important to get exactly right. You’re just giving the agent or publisher an idea of what kind of people this story will attract.

Marketing:

This is where you list what you, the author, is willing to do to market your novel. Here’s some ideas of what you could list here.

  • Local Book Signings
  • Presentation at library
  • Museum Presentation
  • Speak at Churches
  • Social Networking
  • Blogs and Websites
  • Blog Tours
  • Influencers

December 2, 2009

Fiction Proposal Biographical Page

The biographical page consists of two parts. Part one is the biographical sketch, and part two is past publications. 

Biographical Sketch:

Don’t put too much effort in this section. You don’t want to write a complete biography about how you wanted to write since you were in third grade. The main thing you want here is the following:

Name

Location: This is important information if you live near the setting of your novel. Otherwise you’ll want to write something like “I live in Akron, Ohio.”

Family: married, number of children. You can mention this, but don’t dwell on it unless you’re related to Jerry Jenkins.

Education: Only have this if you have training of education in something that relates to writing such as an English degree or you’ve taken a writing course. If the story touches on something where your education helps, go ahead and put that. For instance, if you’re writing about a police officer and you’ve taken law enforcement training, that would be applicable. Also if you’ve had nurses training and are writing about hospital life, put that down.

Career: Only list this if it’s applicable.

Writing Groups: If you belong to any writing groups, list these.

Websites/Blogs: List any websites or blogs you have.

Past Publications:

If you’ve been published at all, include this section. Otherwise leave it out. Also leave out any self-published or vanity published books or novels unless they’ve sold over 10,000 copies. POD and e-books can be listed if you didn’t have to pay to have them published. You’ll want to include name of publication, date, and publishing company.

December 1, 2009

Writing Challenge Winner

Here’s the final stats for the writing challenge.

Tamera Kraft (That’s me, but I don’t count for the prize) – 38,363

Lorna G. Poston – 4,588

Janice Green – 21,436

Faith – 58,798 Congratulations Faith for reaching the goal.

Newmauldon – 16,733

KM Weiland – 913

So Faith is the winner and the only one who reached the 50,000 word goal. Congratulations to everyone for committing to writing. I will have another challenge with prizes in March. Tell your friends.

November 29, 2009

Fiction Proposal Sell Sheet

The sell sheet is the second page of your fiction proposal. Not all agents or publishers require a sell sheet, but some do. Even if they don’t, it doesn’t hurt to add a sell sheet to your proposal.

Your sell sheet should include the following elements:

Promo Sentence Sales Handle:

These are sometimes called loglines or taglines. This is one sentence or a couple of short sentences, sometimes just a phrase, that gets you interested in the book. To get an idea of how to write a sales handle, look at best-selling novels or popular movies. Here’s a few good ones.

The Patriot: Before they were soldiers, they were family. Before they were legends, they were heros. Before there was a nation, there was a fight for freedom.

Air Force One: Air Force one is hijacked with the president and his family aboard.

Independence Day: Aliens try to invade earth on Independence Day.

Liar, Liar: An attorney, because of a birthday wish, can’t tell any lies for 24 hours.

The Hunt for Red October: A Soviet submarine captain uses Russia’s ultimate underwater weapon as a means to defect to the west.

A good logline has three components:

  • Who the story is about (protagonist)
  • What he strives for (goal).
  • What stands in his way (antagonistic force).

Back Cover Promotion:

This is the one to two paragraphs you would have on the back cover of your novel telling what your book is about. You don’t want to give away endings or surprises here. The Missionary by William Carmichael and David Lambert has an example of a good one. 

David and his wife Christie rescue impoverished children in the slums of Venezuela. But for David, that’s not enough. The supply of homeless children is endless because of the corrupt policies of the Venezuelan government.

In a rare moment of anger, David lashes out publicly against the government, unaware of the chain reaction that will soon follow.

When the CIA offers David a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to play a key role in a “bloodless” coup, he decides to go for it. But little by little, he falls into an unimaginable web of deceit that ends in a desperate, life-or-death gamble to flee the country with his wife and son, with all the resources of a corrupt dictatorship at their heels.

Genre:

Tell what genre this is. If it fits in more than one genre, list only two and place the most important one first. The exception to this is if the novel fits in the Christian category. Then you can list Christian, then two genres. For more information about the different genres, click here.

Word Length:

You can estimate here to the nearest thousand. Also your word processor program word count is acceptable. There’s no need to use any complicated formulas.

Series:

If this novel is part of a series, list the other books and a short blurb on what they’re about.

Purpose or Spiritual Premise:

Some agents require this. Don’t sweat about it because it’s not a deal breaker. Just list any theme you notice. If you have scripture the theme is based on, list that here too.

History of the Manuscript:

This is important information for agents. They will want to know if you’ve submitted the manuscript to any publishers.

November 23, 2009

Writing Challenge: Last Week – Nov. 22-30

This is the last week for the writing challenge, but I’ve decided to have another one in March. There won’t be a prize for this week, but the grand prize for total words written will be announced on December 1st. The grand prize is the book, “Writing the Breakout Novel” by Donald Maas.

The totals for last week are as follows:

Tamera Kraft (That’s me, but I don’t count for the prize) – 10,024 words Total – 30,090

Lorna G. Poston – (didn’t post last week) Total – 4,588

Janice Green – 3,244 words Total – 18,571

Faith – 11,647 words Total – 46,605

Newmauldon – 5,228 words Total – 11,955

KM Weiland – (Didn’t post this week) Total – 913

If anyone has words they didn’t post, just add them to this week’s totals. Congratulations, Newmauldon, for winning “Plot & Structure” by James Scott Bell. You really did a great job this week. Send me your contact info at tkraft [at] sbcglobal [dot] net and I’ll mail you the book.

So far Faith is ahead. But we still have a little more than a week to go.

In March, I’ll have a March Madness Writing Challenge. The rules will be a little different, but I’ll give away some more prizes. So let your friends know about it.

Tamera’s Word Counts:

Monday – 732 words total

Tuesday – 2,723 words total

Wednesday – 3,167 words total

Thursday – NONE :)

Friday – 370 words (Spent most of my time researching wolf attacks for a scene.)

Saturday – 1,281 words (All on blogs & newsletters.)